四川省重点中学协作体2026届高三第一次联考语文作文深度解析+例文示范
In depth analysis and example demonstration of Chinese composition in the first joint examination of the 2026 senior high school of Sichuan Province's key high school cooperative group

【原题呈现】
【 Original title presentation 】
材料一：身处日新月异的数智时代，有人认为，为人处世应当洒脱随性，敢于“来一场说走就走的旅行”。
Material 1: In the rapidly changing era of digital intelligence, some people believe that one should be free and easy in dealing with people, and dare to "take a spontaneous trip".
材料二：也有人认为，应做好万全之策，“三思而后行”。
Material 2: Some people also believe that a comprehensive strategy should be taken, and "think twice before acting".
以上材料引发了你怎样的联想和思考？请写一篇文章。
What associations and thoughts did the above materials evoke in you? Please write an article.
要求：选准角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭；不得泄露个人信息；不少于800字。
Requirements: Choose the right angle, determine the intention, clarify the style, and draft the title on your own; Do not copy or plagiarize; Do not disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.
一、作文试题点评
1、 Commentary on Composition Test Questions
本次作文题难度适中且思辨性突出，命题紧扣数智时代的鲜明特征，精准捕捉当代人处世态度的核心矛盾。题目以二元对立的材料设置情境，一方倡导洒脱随性的生命姿态，另一方主张审慎周全的行事原则，既贴合数智时代快节奏、多变化的现实语境，又贴近青年群体的人生选择困惑，易引发情感共鸣与深度思考。命题巧妙关联语文学科核心素养，重点考查“思维发展与提升”的辩证思维能力，同时引导学生“观照现实、反思自我”。对高三学生而言，题目既切中其备考阶段的抉择焦虑（如专业选择、备考策略），又启发其思考未来人生的处世之道；社会价值层面，为身处变革时代的人们提供了平衡“突破与稳健”的智慧指引，兼具现实意义与思想厚度。
The difficulty of this essay topic is moderate and the speculative nature is prominent. The topic closely follows the distinctive characteristics of the digital age and accurately captures the core contradiction of contemporary people's attitudes towards life. The topic is set in a context of binary opposition, advocating a free and casual attitude towards life on one hand, and a cautious and comprehensive principle of action on the other. It is in line with the fast-paced and ever-changing reality of the digital age, as well as the life choices and confusion of young people, which can easily trigger emotional resonance and deep thinking. The proposition cleverly relates to the core literacy of Chinese language subject, focusing on the dialectical thinking ability of "thinking development and improvement", while guiding students to "observe reality and reflect on themselves". For senior high school students, the questions not only address their decision-making anxiety during the preparation stage (such as major selection and preparation strategies), but also inspire them to think about their future life strategies; At the level of social value, it provides a wise guidance for people in the era of change to balance "breakthrough and stability", with both practical significance and ideological depth.
二、材料分析与立意探究
2、 Material analysis and conceptual exploration
1、核心观点解析
1. Core viewpoint analysis
“洒脱随性”：并非盲目冲动，核心是“顺应本心、敢破敢立”。表层是不被世俗条框束缚、主动拥抱变化的生活态度，如突破固化思维尝试新事物；深层是数智时代下，应对快速变革的灵活心态——在守住道德与法律底线的前提下，以豁达姿态接纳不确定性，以勇气突破思维定式，释放生命的活力与创造力。其本质是“有所为有所不为”的从容，是面对机遇时的果断与魄力。
Freedom and casualness ": It is not blind impulse, the core is" following the heart, daring to break and standing ". On the surface, there is an attitude towards life that is not bound by secular norms and actively embraces change, such as breaking through rigid thinking and trying new things; In the era of digital intelligence, the deep level is the flexible mentality to cope with rapid changes - while maintaining moral and legal bottom lines, accepting uncertainty with an open-minded attitude, breaking through thinking patterns with courage, and unleashing the vitality and creativity of life. Its essence is the composure of 'doing and not doing', and the decisiveness and courage when facing opportunities.
“三思而后行”：并非畏缩不前，核心是“审慎周全、稳扎稳打”。表层是做事前充分调研、周密规划，规避不必要的风险；深层是数智时代信息繁杂背景下，对“浮躁冒进”的理性克制——以清醒的认知、严谨的逻辑审视选择，以长远眼光权衡利弊，确保行动的方向性与可行性。其本质是对自我、对他人、对时代的负责，是应对复杂局面的定力与智慧。
'Think twice before acting': It's not about hesitating, the core is' being cautious, thorough, and steady '. On the surface, it is necessary to conduct thorough research and careful planning before taking action to avoid unnecessary risks; In the era of complex information in the digital age, there is a rational restraint against "impetuosity and recklessness" - using clear cognition, rigorous logic to examine choices, weighing the pros and cons with a long-term perspective, and ensuring the direction and feasibility of actions. Its essence is responsibility to oneself, others, and the times, and it is the determination and wisdom to deal with complex situations.
材料本质：探讨数智时代背景下，个体如何平衡“洒脱随性”与“三思而后行”的处世态度，在变革与稳定之间找到契合点，实现个人成长与发展的行稳致远。
Essence of Materials: Exploring how individuals can balance the attitude of "free and easy" and "think twice before acting" in the context of the digital age, find a point of convergence between change and stability, and achieve stable and far-reaching personal growth and development.
2、两则材料关系与逻辑
2. The Relationship and Logic between Two Materials
两则材料看似对立，实则构成“互补共生”的辩证关系，共同指向“数智时代最优处世之道”。材料一强调“突破与活力”，应对时代变化的灵活性；材料二强调“稳健与理性”，筑牢行动的根基。二者并非非此即彼，而是动态平衡的统一体：缺乏洒脱的审慎易陷入“因循守旧”，错失时代机遇；脱离审慎的洒脱则沦为“盲目冒进”，终将招致风险。数智时代的复杂性与不确定性，决定了唯有将二者结合，才能在变革中找准方向，在稳健中保持活力。
The two materials may seem contradictory, but they actually constitute a dialectical relationship of "complementary coexistence", pointing together to the "best way of dealing with the world in the era of digital intelligence". Material 1 emphasizes "breakthrough and vitality" and flexibility in responding to changes in the times; Material 2 emphasizes "prudence and rationality" to build a solid foundation for action. The two are not either or, but a dynamic balance of unity: a lack of free and easy prudence can easily lead to "sticking to the old ways" and miss opportunities of the times; Disregarding prudence and freedom will lead to 'blind recklessness' and ultimately incur risks. The complexity and uncertainty of the digital age determine that only by combining the two can we find the right direction in change and maintain vitality in stability.
3、思路拓展方向
3. Expanding direction of thinking
个人：成长中如何平衡“尝试新可能”（洒脱）与“规划人生方向”（审慎），如高三学生在备考中，既需洒脱心态应对考试起伏，又需审慎规划复习方案；职场人既需洒脱接纳行业变革，又需审慎提升核心技能。
Personal: How to balance "trying new possibilities" (carefree) and "planning life direction" (cautious) in growth, such as high school seniors who need to have a carefree attitude to cope with the ups and downs of exams and carefully plan their review plans during preparation; Workplace professionals need to embrace industry changes with ease, while also carefully enhancing their core skills.
国家/社会：数智时代的发展中，“洒脱”体现为敢于突破技术壁垒、勇于制度创新，“审慎”体现为坚守安全底线、统筹发展与风险，二者结合推动高质量发展。
Nation/Society: In the development of the digital age, "freedom" is reflected in daring to break through technological barriers and innovate systems, while "prudence" is reflected in adhering to safety bottom lines, coordinating development and risks, and combining the two to promote high-quality development.
古今中外：苏轼“一蓑烟雨任平生”的洒脱与“为官一任，造福一方”的审慎；马斯克敢闯敢试的创新洒脱与对航天技术细节的极致审慎；中国航天事业既敢于突破尖端技术（洒脱），又严守每一个质量关卡（审慎）。
From ancient times to the present, both domestically and internationally: Su Shi's carefree and cautious attitude of "serving as an official for the benefit of one's life"; Musk's daring innovation and extreme caution towards aerospace technology details; China's aerospace industry not only dares to break through cutting-edge technology (carefree), but also strictly adheres to every quality level (cautious).
4、时代关联与立意深化
4. Time relevance and deepening of intention
立足数智时代“技术迭代快、信息爆炸、机遇与风险并存”的特点，结合当代青年“内卷焦虑”“选择迷茫”的现实困境，超越“非此即彼”的二元对立思维。可关联“创新与稳健”“机遇与风险”“个人成长与时代发展”等时代议题，让立意既有“个人如何处世”的现实温度，又有“青年与时代同频共振”的理论深度——如在科技攻关中，既需洒脱的创新勇气突破瓶颈，又需审慎的科学态度筑牢根基；在人生选择中，既需洒脱的心态接纳不确定性，又需审慎的规划明确方向。
Based on the characteristics of "fast technological iteration, information explosion, and coexistence of opportunities and risks" in the era of digital intelligence, combined with the realistic difficulties of contemporary youth's "internal competition anxiety" and "choice confusion", we aim to transcend the binary oppositional thinking of "either or". It can be related to contemporary issues such as "innovation and stability", "opportunities and risks", "personal growth and the development of the times", so that the intention has both the practical temperature of "how to deal with people" and the theoretical depth of "resonance between youth and the times". For example, in the technological attack, it requires both free and unrestrained innovation courage to break through bottlenecks and a cautious scientific attitude to build a solid foundation; In life choices, it is necessary to accept uncertainty with a free and easy attitude, as well as carefully plan and clarify direction.
5、核心思辨问题
5. Core speculative questions
核心问题：数智时代，个体应如何平衡“洒脱随性”与“三思而后行”，找到适合自身的处世之道？
Core question: In the era of digital intelligence, how should individuals balance "freedom and casualness" with "thinking twice before acting", and find a way of dealing with the world that suits themselves?
思辨点：① 洒脱与审慎的边界——如何在洒脱中守住底线，在审慎中避免保守；② 二者的动态平衡——不同人生阶段、不同领域（如创新、决策、生活），如何灵活调整二者的权重；③ 时代适配性——数智时代对“洒脱”的创新勇气与“审慎”的风险意识提出了哪些新要求。
Reflection point: ① The boundary between freedom and prudence - how to hold the bottom line in freedom and avoid conservatism in prudence; ② The dynamic balance between the two - how to flexibly adjust the weight of the two in different life stages and fields (such as innovation, decision-making, and life); ③ Adaptation to the times - What new requirements has the digital age put forward for the courage to innovate freely and the risk awareness of prudence.
三、立意与写作方向
3、 Intention and Writing Direction
核心立意
Core concept
1、 以洒脱破局，以审慎护航，二者共生，方能在数智时代行稳致远——洒脱赋予突破的勇气，审慎筑牢前行的根基，辩证统一方为处世大智慧。
1. Breaking through the situation with freedom and escorting with prudence, the two coexist to achieve stability and far-reaching success in the era of digital intelligence - freedom gives the courage to break through, prudence builds a solid foundation for progress, and dialectical unity is the great wisdom of dealing with the world.
2、 数智时代的处世之道，在于“该洒脱时敢闯荡，该审慎时稳扎根”，以平衡之姿应对变革，书写从容人生。
2. The way of dealing with things in the era of digital intelligence lies in "daring to venture when free and easy, and firmly rooting when cautious", responding to changes with a balanced attitude, and writing a calm life.
写作方向示例
Example of Writing Direction
方向一（个人成长）：聚焦高三备考与人生选择，谈“以洒脱心态应对挫折，以审慎规划筑牢基础”，在备考中不纠结于一时得失（洒脱），同时精准定位薄弱环节、科学制定计划（审慎）。
Direction 1 (Personal Growth): Focus on the preparation for the third year of high school and life choices, talk about "dealing with setbacks with a free and easy attitude, building a solid foundation with careful planning", not worrying about short-term gains and losses during preparation (free and easy), while accurately identifying weak links and scientifically formulating plans (careful).
方向二（科技发展）：着眼数智时代的技术创新，论述“洒脱的创新勇气与审慎的风险把控”是科技突破的双翼，如人工智能发展既需敢于探索的洒脱，又需严守伦理底线的审慎。
Direction 2 (Technological Development): Focusing on technological innovation in the era of digital intelligence, this paper discusses that "free and unrestrained innovation courage and cautious risk control" are the two wings of technological breakthroughs. For example, the development of artificial intelligence requires both free and unrestrained exploration and cautious adherence to ethical bottom lines.
方向三（社会治理）：结合数智时代的社会变革，探讨城市发展中“洒脱的开放姿态与审慎的统筹规划”的平衡，如智慧城市建设既要勇于接纳新技术（洒脱），又要周密考虑民生需求与安全风险（审慎）。
Direction Three (Social Governance): Combining the social changes of the digital age, explore the balance between "free and open attitude and prudent overall planning" in urban development. For example, the construction of smart cities should not only bravely accept new technologies (free and easy), but also carefully consider people's livelihood needs and safety risks (prudent).
写作层次
Writing level
1、 侧重辩证统一：论述洒脱与审慎并非对立，而是相辅相成、缺一不可，共同构成数智时代的最优处世策略。
1. Emphasis on dialectical unity: The discussion of freedom and prudence is not contradictory, but complementary and indispensable, together constituting the optimal strategy for dealing with people in the era of intelligence.
2、 侧重场景适配：阐述在不同场景下，灵活调整洒脱与审慎的侧重，如生活中可多一份洒脱，工作中需多一份审慎。
2. Focusing on scene adaptation: Elaborate on the flexible adjustment of the emphasis on freedom and prudence in different scenarios, such as having more freedom in life and more prudence in work.
3、 侧重时代意义：探讨平衡二者对当代青年突破成长困境、适应时代发展的重要价值，彰显青年担当。
3. Focusing on the significance of the times: exploring the important value of balancing the two for contemporary youth to overcome growth difficulties and adapt to the development of the times, and demonstrating the responsibility of youth.
四、给高三学生的理解建议
4、 Suggestions for understanding high school seniors
1.联系自身体验、关联日常学习生活
1. Connect with personal experience and daily learning life
洒脱：面对模拟考试的起伏，不自我否定、不焦虑内耗，以洒脱心态接纳失误，将精力聚焦于问题整改；敢于尝试新的学习方法（如思维导图、错题复盘法），不被固有习惯束缚，这是成长中的“洒脱”。
Free and easy: Faced with the ups and downs of simulated exams, without self doubt, anxiety or internal friction, accepting mistakes with a free and easy attitude, and focusing on problem rectification; Daring to try new learning methods (such as mind maps and wrong question review methods) and not being bound by established habits is the "freedom" in growth.
审慎：制定复习计划时，结合自身学科优势与薄弱环节，精准定位目标，不盲目跟风刷题；选择报考专业时，充分调研行业发展、自身兴趣与能力，不草率决策，这是人生选择中的“审慎”。
Prudence: When formulating a review plan, combine one's own disciplinary strengths and weaknesses, accurately position goals, and do not blindly follow the trend and brush up questions; When choosing a major to apply for, it is important to conduct thorough research on industry development, personal interests and abilities, and not make hasty decisions. This is the "prudence" in life choices.
高三的成长，正是“洒脱”与“审慎”的平衡之旅——以洒脱卸下心理包袱，以审慎筑牢知识根基，方能在高考战场上从容应战。
The growth of high school seniors is a journey of balancing "freedom" and "prudence" - by shedding psychological burdens and building a solid knowledge foundation with prudence, one can calmly face the battlefield of the college entrance examination.
2.理解概念本质
2. Understand the essence of concepts
“洒脱”不是“放纵任性”，而是“历经思考后的从容”，是不被细枝末节牵绊的格局；“审慎”不是“畏缩不前”，而是“深思熟虑后的坚定”，是不被浮躁情绪左右的理性。二者共同服务于“高效成长、精准发力”的核心目标，正如数智时代的我们，既要敢于拥抱变化，又要善于把控方向。
'Free and unrestrained' is not 'indulgence and capriciousness', but' calmness after careful consideration ', which is a pattern that is not bound by trivial details; Prudence "is not" timidity ", but" steadfastness after careful consideration ", it is rationality that is not influenced by impetuous emotions. Both serve the core goal of "efficient growth and precise power" together, just like us in the era of digital intelligence, we must not only dare to embrace change, but also be good at controlling direction.
五、优秀标题推荐
5、 Excellent Title Recommendation
1.《洒脱为翼，审慎为基，数智时代任我行》
1. "Freedom as the wing, prudence as the foundation, let me do in the era of intelligence"
2.《守审慎之心，携洒脱前行》
2. "With a cautious heart, move forward freely"
3.《于洒脱中破局，在审慎中行远》
3. Breaking through the situation with freedom and prudence, traveling far and wide
4.《数智时代处世道：一半洒脱，一半审慎》
4. "The Way of Life in the Age of Wisdom: Half Free and Half Prudent"
5.《不困于审慎，不流于洒脱》
5. "Not trapped in prudence, not flowing into freedom"
6.《以审慎定方向，用洒脱赴山海》
6. "Setting the Direction with Prudence, Traveling to Mountains and Seas with Freedom"
7.《洒脱与审慎共生，方能行稳致远》
7. The coexistence of freedom and prudence is the key to achieving stability and long-term success
8.《破局需洒脱，立世要审慎》
Breaking the deadlock requires freedom, and establishing the world requires caution
9.《数智浪潮中：于稳健处扎根，在灵动处生长》
9. "In the Wave of Intelligence: Rooted in Stability, Growing in Flexibility"
10.《平衡之智：让洒脱与审慎共筑人生坦途》
10. The Wisdom of Balance: Let Freedom and Prudence Build a Smooth Path in Life Together
六、作文素材集锦
6、 Collection of Composition Materials
事例素材
Case materials
1.中国航天事业：既有着“敢上九天揽月”的洒脱勇气，突破一个又一个技术壁垒（如嫦娥探月、天问巡火）；又有着“毫米级精准”的审慎态度，每一个数据、每一个零件都反复校验，最终实现“发射即成功”的辉煌。
1. China's aerospace industry: It has the carefree courage to "dare to explore the moon" and break through one technological barrier after another (such as Chang'e's lunar exploration and Tianwen's patrol); With a cautious attitude of "millimeter level precision", every data and every component is repeatedly verified, ultimately achieving the glory of "launch is success".
2.苏轼：既有“竹杖芒鞋轻胜马”的洒脱，面对贬谪从容豁达，在困境中开辟生活新境界；又有“为官一任，造福一方”的审慎，在杭州任上周密规划，修苏堤、治西湖，切实保障民生，用理性与责任书写为官担当。
2. Su Shi: With the carefree spirit of "bamboo cane and worn-out shoes are lighter than horses", he faced exile with ease and opened up a new realm of life in adversity; There is also a cautious approach of 'serving as an official for the benefit of the local community'. During his tenure in Hangzhou, he carefully planned the construction of the Su Causeway and the governance of West Lake, effectively ensuring people's livelihoods, and wrote about his official responsibilities with rationality and responsibility.
3.字节跳动：在技术创新上展现洒脱姿态，敢于投入陌生领域（如从短视频到直播、从国内到海外），快速响应市场变化；在合规经营上保持审慎态度，严格遵守各国法律法规，主动完善内容审核机制，平衡创新与风险。
3. ByteDance: show a free and easy attitude in technical innovation, dare to invest in unfamiliar fields (such as short video to live broadcast, domestic to overseas), and quickly respond to market changes; Maintain a cautious attitude towards compliant operations, strictly comply with laws and regulations of various countries, proactively improve content review mechanisms, and balance innovation and risk.
4.樊锦诗：选择扎根敦煌时，有着“一生择一事”的洒脱坚守，不被都市繁华诱惑；在文物保护工作中，有着极致的审慎，每一次修复、每一项研究都精益求精，用科学方法守护千年文明。
4. Fan Jinshi: When choosing to root in Dunhuang, he had the carefree perseverance of "choosing one thing for a lifetime" and was not tempted by the hustle and bustle of the city; In the protection of cultural relics, there is extreme caution, striving for excellence in every restoration and research, and using scientific methods to safeguard a millennium civilization.
5.数智时代创业者：既需洒脱的魄力，敢于拥抱新技术、新模式，在迭代中寻找机遇；又需审慎的判断，精准调研市场需求，严控资金风险，避免盲目扩张，方能在激烈竞争中立足。
5. Entrepreneurs in the era of digital intelligence: They need both free spirited courage, the courage to embrace new technologies and models, and the opportunity to seek opportunities through iteration; Careful judgment, precise research on market demand, strict control of financial risks, and avoidance of blind expansion are necessary to establish a foothold in fierce competition.
理论素材
Theoretical materials
1.孔子：“质胜文则野，文胜质则史。文质彬彬，然后君子。”（类比：洒脱为“质”，审慎为“文”，二者平衡方能成君子之风）
Confucius said, "If quality is superior to literature, then it will be wild; if literature is superior to quality, then it will be history. If one is gentle and refined, then they will be a gentleman
2.《道德经》：“知者不惑，仁者不忧，勇者不惧。”（审慎使人“不惑”，洒脱赋予人“不惧”，二者结合成就健全人格）
2. The Tao Te Ching: "Those who know are not confused, those who are kind are not worried, and those who are brave are not afraid." (Prudence makes people "not confused," while freedom endows people with "not afraid." The combination of the two creates a sound personality.)
3.亚里士多德：“勇敢是怯懦和鲁莽的中道。”（引申：洒脱与审慎的平衡，是数智时代处世的“中道”智慧）
Aristotle said, "Bravery is the middle ground between cowardice and recklessness
4.任正非：“我们既要敢于亮剑，又要善于藏拙。”（亮剑是洒脱的勇气，藏拙是审慎的智慧）
4. Ren Zhengfei: "We must not only dare to wield our swords, but also be good at hiding our shortcomings." (Showing our swords is the courage to be free and unrestrained, while hiding our shortcomings is the wisdom of prudence)